What is the strangest dish you’ve ever tasted?

2019-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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There are a few shocking Korean foods for foreigners, such as live octopus, chicken feet and pupas of the silkworm. I also like these things, but there was something that I had to give up to eat. Seven years ago, I was involved in domestic construction project in my work, and there were several chances to go local restaurants with my client. One day, he wanted to eat dog meat. Eating dog is controversial culture in my country and I was halfhearted about his proposal, but he said he knew a very good place. I wanted to respect his opinion, so we went there. The smell was not so good, but the taste was not bad. Few minutes later, the elder hostess said that she wanted to serve special parts to us, and she brought two small balls. It was true. Those were too extraordinary parts to eat. We were really thankful for her hospitality, but we could not take it. In addition, some people argue that it is very good for health. However, it was wrong as for me. One hour later, I had to go toilet.

강사 첨삭

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Teacher ELLY.

What is the strangest dish you’ve ever tasted?

There are a few shocking Korean foods for foreigners, such as live octopus, chicken feet and pupas from the silkworm.

CORRECT!

or>>There are some disturbing Korean foods for foreigners. These include live octopus, chicken feet and pupas from the silkworm.

I also like these things, but there was something that I had to give up to eat.

>>I also like these things, but something made me gave up eating these things.

Seven years ago, I was involved in domestic construction project in my work, and there were several chances to go local restaurants with my client.

>>Seven years ago, I was involved in a domestic construction project from my work, and I had several chances to go to the local restaurants with my client.

One day, he wanted to eat some dog meat.

CORRECT!

or>>There was a day when he craved for some dog meat.

Eating dog is controversial culture in my country and I was halfhearted about his proposal, but he said he knew a very good place.

>>Eating dog meat is a controversial practice in my country and I was halfhearted about his proposal, but he said he knew a very good place.

I wanted to respect his opinion, so we went there.

CORRECT!

or>>I wanted to show respect towards this propensity of his, so I went there along with him.

The smell was not so good, but the taste was not bad.

CORRECT!

or>>The smell was not that very welcoming, although the taste was alright.

Few minutes later, the elder hostess said that she wanted to serve special parts to us, and she brought two small balls.

>>A few minutes later, the senior server told us that she wanted to serve us some special parts, so she brought two small balls.

It was true. Those were too extraordinary parts to eat.

>>She was right. These were too extraordinary tasting parts.

We were really thankful for her hospitality, but we could not take it.

CORRECT!

or>>We were really grateful for her unequalled hospitality, but we were unable take it anymore.

In addition, some people argue that it is very good for health.

>>In addition, some people argued that it was very good for the health.

However, it was wrong as for me.

>>However, it was so wrong for me.

One hour later, I had to go toilet.

>>One hour later, I had to go to the toilet.

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