What is the strangest food you\'ve ever eaten ?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am afraid that you are shocked to hear about my experience.
I am from countryside and I was born and raised there untill I was 19 after that I moved to Seoul to study college.
When I was in the countryside, I loved playing with my friends and was really naughty.
At that time, there were a lot of bugs and insects in my hometown, so I used to catch and play with them for fun.
Then, when I became a senior in elementary school, I started catching snakes and frogs with my friends. And we even used to roast them over a fire and ate them.
Now I\'m so scared of snakes that I can\'t even touch them.
Even now, I can\'t believe how I caught snakes and even roasted and ate them.
Hi, Shay.
I am so excited to talk to you and learn English from you every morning.
Especially, I really like your lively and outgoing personality and it seems to be helpful for my English study.
And although we are having a short free talk now, hopefully I want to gradually have a longer free conversation with you.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] Ho^^
Thank you for sharing.
Actually, catching snakes is not new to me.
Although I didn\'t experience it myself, I grew seeing boys who also play with snakes.
Eating snakes is common in my hometown too. ^^
I don\'t know these days though.
_T. SHAY^^
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I am afraid that you are shocked to hear about my experience.
>>I am afraid that you would be shocked to hear about my experience.
I am from countryside and I was born and raised there untill I was 19 after that I moved to Seoul to study college.
>>I was born and raised in the countryside, so I\'d been living there until I turned 19 and moved to Seoul to study in the university.
When I was in the countryside, I loved playing with my friends and was really naughty.
>>Correct
OR: I enjoyed hanging out with my friends when I was in the countryside.
At that time, there were a lot of bugs and insects in my hometown, so I used to catch and play with them for fun.
>>Correct
OR: Bugs and insects were common in my hometown, so I used to catch them and play with them.
Then, when I became a senior in elementary school, I started catching snakes and frogs with my friends.
>>Correct
OR: On my last year in elementary, my friends and I started catching wild animals like snakes and frogs.
And we even used to roast them over a fire and ate them.
>>And we even used to roast them over the fire and ate them.
Now I\'m so scared of snakes that I can\'t even touch them.
>>Correct
OR: Unlike before, I can\'t touch snakes now, and I\'m scared of them.
Even now, I can\'t believe how I caught snakes and even roasted and ate them.
>>Correct
OR: When I remember the past, I still can\'t believe how I caught snakes, roasted them and ate them.
Hi, Shay.
I am so excited to talk to you and learn English from you every morning.
Especially, I really like your lively and outgoing personality and it seems to be helpful for my English study.
And although we are having a short free talk now, hopefully I want to gradually have a longer free conversation with you.
Thank you for sharing.
Actually, catching snakes is not new to me.
Although I didn\'t experience it myself, I grew seeing boys who also play with snakes.
Eating snakes is common in my hometown too. ^^
I don\'t know these days though.
_T. SHAY^^
***
I am afraid that you are shocked to hear about my experience.
>>I am afraid that you would be shocked to hear about my experience.
I am from countryside and I was born and raised there untill I was 19 after that I moved to Seoul to study college.
>>I was born and raised in the countryside, so I\'d been living there until I turned 19 and moved to Seoul to study in the university.
When I was in the countryside, I loved playing with my friends and was really naughty.
>>Correct
OR: I enjoyed hanging out with my friends when I was in the countryside.
At that time, there were a lot of bugs and insects in my hometown, so I used to catch and play with them for fun.
>>Correct
OR: Bugs and insects were common in my hometown, so I used to catch them and play with them.
Then, when I became a senior in elementary school, I started catching snakes and frogs with my friends.
>>Correct
OR: On my last year in elementary, my friends and I started catching wild animals like snakes and frogs.
And we even used to roast them over a fire and ate them.
>>And we even used to roast them over the fire and ate them.
Now I\'m so scared of snakes that I can\'t even touch them.
>>Correct
OR: Unlike before, I can\'t touch snakes now, and I\'m scared of them.
Even now, I can\'t believe how I caught snakes and even roasted and ate them.
>>Correct
OR: When I remember the past, I still can\'t believe how I caught snakes, roasted them and ate them.
Hi, Shay.
I am so excited to talk to you and learn English from you every morning.
Especially, I really like your lively and outgoing personality and it seems to be helpful for my English study.
And although we are having a short free talk now, hopefully I want to gradually have a longer free conversation with you.
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