What is the strangest thing you have ever done?
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A couple of a years ago, I had a strange experiences that I went to Deagu city in order to go shopping with my family.
>> A couple of years ago, I had a strange experience when I went to Daegu city to go shopping with my family.
Which was close to my home and it took about 1 hours to get there.
>> It was nearby my house and it took me about an hour to get there.
Anyway, I was driving my car in oder to moved to another places.
>> Anyway, I drove my car to go to places.
And I stopped the crossroads and waited to a traffic light changed to green color.
>> I stopped at the crossroads and waited for the traffic light to turn to green.
I started off slowly when the traffic light changed.
>> CORRECT
All of a sudden, any cars entered in front of my car without turning sinal lights.
>> All of a sudden, the cars overtook without turning on their signal lights.
I was so suprised that I took a break immediately.
>> I was so surprised that I took a break immediately.
Unfortunately, my car hit another car rear bumper.
>> Unfortunately, my car hit another car\'s rear bumper.
Besides, my wife, my elder daughter and youner daughter were in my car together.
>> Besides, my wife, my elder daughter and my younger daughter were in the car.
Fortunately, my family didn\'t have any big injury that time.
>> Fortunately, my family didn\'t have any big injuries that time.
Eventually, Opponent driver and I went to a police station to recieved an investigation regarding the traffic accident.
>> We were eventually called to the police station and were investigated regarding the traffic accident.
According to the investigation result, the opponent driver\'s fault was 70% and my fault was 30%.
>> According to the investigation result, it\'s the opponent driver\'s fault was 70% and my fault was 30%.
In my case, all expenses were covered by insurance.
>> CORRECT
That\'s it.
>> CORRECT
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