What is the traditional clothing of your country? How often do people dress traditionally these days
학생이 쓴 원문
Korea has a beautiful traditional costume called Hanbok.
Hanbok has beautiful colors and fine lines.
However, it is uncomfortable in everyday life, so improved Hanbok was created, and it is popular among people who like Hanbok and those who reduce discomfort.
Hanbok is usually worn on traditional holidays, and parents are worn on their children\'s weddings.
The bride and groom wear the manners of greeting their parents after the wedding.
I wear Hanbok for children\'s weddings at the end of the year or at relatives\' weddings.
People don\'t wear it often, so they borrow it.
People say that it is good to choose a Hanbok that you can borrow on time. I am also prefer it.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! I heard about the \"Hanbok\" and I admire it\'s color combination. It\'s good to know that you still use it on special occasions. I think that is a good way to preserve your culture.~~T.Dee
Korea has a beautiful traditional costume called Hanbok.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: Korea has a beautiful traditional attire called \"Hanbok\".
Hanbok has beautiful colors and fine lines.
Hanbok has beautiful colors and fine lines.
>>CORRECT!
However, it is uncomfortable in everyday life, so improved Hanbok was created, and it is popular among people who like Hanbok and those who reduce discomfort.
However, it is uncomfortable in everyday life, so improved Hanbok was created, and it is popular among people who like Hanbok and those who reduce discomfort.
>>However, it is uncomfortable to wear in everyday life, so modified Hanboks were created. It is popular among those who like to wear Hanbok comfortably.
Hanbok is usually worn on traditional holidays, and parents are worn on their children\'s weddings.
Hanbok is usually worn on traditional holidays, and parents are worn on their children\'s weddings.
>>Hanbok is usually worn on traditional holidays and it is also worn by parents their children\'s weddings.
The bride and groom wear the manners of greeting their parents after the wedding.
The bride and groom wear the manners of greeting their parents after the wedding.
>>The bride and groom wear the same to greet their parents after the wedding.
I wear Hanbok for children\'s weddings at the end of the year or at relatives\' weddings.
I wear Hanbok for children\'s weddings at the end of the year or at relatives\' weddings.
>>I wore a Hanbok during my children\'s weddings or during my relatives\' weddings.
People don\'t wear it often, so they borrow it.
>>Nowadays, people don\'t wear it anymore so they just borrow one when needed.
People say that it is good to choose a Hanbok that you can borrow on time. I am also prefer it.
People say that it is good to choose a Hanbok that you can borrow on time. I am also prefer it.
>>People say that it is good simply borrow a Hanbok that you can use anytime instead of buying one. I also prefer it.
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