What is the traditional drink in your country for celebrating?

2023-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Mika

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You know, there\'s a Makgeolli. It\'s a traditional Korean liquor that fermented and matured rice. It\'s also a drink to pray for good and celebrating farming in this year. But, I don\'t like it. I prefer Soju than that. Hahaha

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Amazing Monday, Elic! The beautiful thing about learning is that no one can take it away from you. You don\'t have to be great to start, but you have to start to be great. Keep it up.

You know, there\'s a Makgeolli.
>>> The famous traditional drink in Korea for celebrating is Makgeolli.

It\'s a traditional Korean liquor that fermented and matured rice.
>>> It\'s a traditional Korean liquor made from fermented, matured rice.

It\'s also a drink to pray for good and celebrating farming in this year.
>>> It\'s also a drink to pray for good and celebrate farming this year.

But, I don\'t like it.
>>> CORRECT.

I prefer Soju than that. Hahaha
>>> I prefer Soju than Makgeolli.

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