What is the weather like in your country for each season?
학생이 쓴 원문
on spring it\'s hot and chilly and in summer it\'s hot.
on fall there is an time that is hot but uselluy it\'s cold and winter it\'s very cold(to me^^)
강사 첨삭
Hi Sunny!
Please take note of the correct prepositions.
Learn also the proper vocabulary to be used.
Let\'s keep working hard.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
on spring it\'s hot and chilly and in summer it\'s hot.
>> It\'s hot and and chilly in spring and it\'s hot in the summer.
on fall there is an time that is hot but uselluy it\'s cold and winter it\'s very cold
on fall there is an time that is hot but uselluy it\'s cold and winter it\'s very cold
>> In fall. there is a period of time when it\'s hot but generally, it\'s cold.
and winter it\'s very cold
>> In winter, it is very cold.
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