What is the weirdest/coolest kind of vehicle you’ve ever seen in your country? Why was it weird/cool
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Kind of vehicle is increased continuously. When I was young, car, bike, bicycle, and inline skates are all I know. But now, there are also many micro mobilities like Hover board.
I think a small electronic car is the weirdest and coolest vehicle which I had seen. Because it is a personal mobility so, one person usually take a car.
It seems like a bike and also a car. The shape of a care looks like a like but it have four wheels. It makes me feel that the car is weird.
However, although I felt the shape of car is strange, the efficiency of car is good. It is cheaper and also can go easier narrow street than general cars because it is smaller.
Furthermore, it use electric power not fossil fuel for driving. So, it is better for environment. I think it is the coolest vehicle because it consider all the efficiency, economics, and environment of vehicle.
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Kind of vehicle is increased continuously.
>>CORRECT!
When I was young, car, bike, bicycle, and inline skates are all I know.
>>When I was young car, bike, bicycle and inline skates are all I know.
But now, there are also many micro mobilities like Hover board.
>>CORRECT!
I think a small electronic car is the weirdest and coolest vehicle which I had seen.
I think a small electronic car is the weirdest and coolest vehicle which I had seen.
>>CORRECT!
Because it is a personal mobility so, one person usually take a car.
>>Because it is a personal mobile so one person usually takes a car.
It seems like a bike and also a car.
>>Because it is a personal mobile so one person usually takes a car.
It seems like a bike and also a car.
>>CORRECT!
The shape of a care looks like a like but it have four wheels.
>>The shape of a car looks like it has four wheels.
It makes me feel that the car is weird.
>>CORRECT!
However, although I felt the shape of car is strange, the efficiency of car is good.
>>CORRECT!
However, although I felt the shape of car is strange, the efficiency of car is good.
>>However, although I felt the shape of the car is strange, the efficiency of the car is good.
It is cheaper and also can go easier narrow street than general cars because it is smaller.
>>It is cheaper and can also drive to narrow street than general cars because it is smaller.
Furthermore, it use electric power not fossil fuel for driving.
>>It is cheaper and can also drive to narrow street than general cars because it is smaller.
Furthermore, it use electric power not fossil fuel for driving.
>>Furthermore, it uses electronic power not fossil fuel for driving.
So, it is better for environment.
>>CORRECT!
I think it is the coolest vehicle because it consider all the efficiency, economics, and environment of vehicle.
>>I think it is the coolest vehicle because it considers all the efficiency, economics and environment.
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