What is the worst experience that you've had in your life. Tell the story and tell the reason why it

I have a friend, his [이름]e is Jung seok - Kang, He is my best friend. When I was 7 years old my father bought a computer. It is a first time that I saw the computer in my life. At that time I played the computer game. The computer game was so fun. So my best friend oftenly come to my house to play the game. That is so interested. But I don't know realy. It will be the start of game addiction. Since the time, My best friend, Jung seok - Kang, having playing the game. Even he must study hard time he playing the computer game. Maybe he was being game addict. He is very blunt and he hate to playing at the outside. But he is my very valuable friend and my best friend forever. At my childhood, if I hadn't the computer and play outside with Jung seok - Kang, how he would changed? If I can go back at that time, I will go outside with best friend Jung seok - Kang

Hi there Vincent! Thank you for sending your composition. You certainly have a point. When computer addiction starts at childhood, it affects the future behavior of a person. It\'s not yet too late for your friend to change. I hope he will find the initiative to change. Please go over the corrections, and feel free to ask me if you have any questions. Anyway, see you in class. Take care and keep safe. _T.Heidi^^ I have a friend, his [이름]e is Jung seok - Kang, He is my best friend. >> I have a friend. His [이름]e is Jung seok