What is the worst experience that you've had in your life. Tell the story and tell the reason why it
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All of the things you mentioned below Sir [이름] are right.
It is really difficult to lose our loved ones.
There are cases wherein some people getting drunk or having vices in order to overcome the pain.
We should know how to handle difficult situations.
However, if we can\'t really handle it we can meet our friends to have someone to talk to.
In that way, we will be able to vent out our feelings.
Thanks for your essay. Keep up the good work.
Teacher Nina
I think the worst experience to anyone is to lose his/her loved one.
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The next worst thing is when one of our family members has to undergo a critical operation due to serious illness.
>> The next worst thing is when one of our family members has to undergo a critical operation due to a serious illness.
Other things like losing a job, failing in exams, conflicts with others, being betrayed by someone who you trusted, or breaking up with your girl/boyfriend are just things that could become “let bygones be bygones”, although you might feel you don’t want to live at the moment.
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Looking back what we’ve experienced, many things that made us deeply depressed and led us to think of even a suicide at that time have become the “past.”
>> Looking back into what we’ve experienced, many things that made us deeply depressed and even led us to think of committing suicide at that time have become the “past.”
In most cases, time can cure and lessen our pain, although you might have a particular case that you can still suffer regardless of the lapse of time.
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When we are depressed, we need to participate in other activities to forget the thing that is bothering you.
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I’m aware that it is easier said than done, especially when the case is happening to others, not me.
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