What is the worst experience you’ve had on public transportation?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was in high school, I forgot my traffic card and took a bus. So I was so surprised and gave a fare by cash. And then I took much coins by change. It\'s because I gave 50 dollars, but the fare is only 1 dollar. So I was very shameful. And I made up my mind remember that I take my traffic card everyday.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Cindy!
I always appreciate your hard work and effort! Keep it up.
It would be more embarrassing if those coins slipped out of your hands. - haha!
Stay well :)
T. Aki~
When I was in high school, I forgot my traffic card and took a bus.
>>> Correct
So I was so surprised and gave a fare by cash.
>>> So I was surprised and pay in cash.
And then I took much coins by change.
>>> Then I took a lot of cons for the change,
It\'s because I gave 50 dollars, but the fare is only 1 dollar.
>>> Correct
So I was very shameful.
>>> It was a shameful moment.
>>> I was very embarrassed.
And I made up my mind remember that I take my traffic card everyday.
>>> And I made up my mind to remember my traffic card every day.
>>> and I made sure not to forget my traffic card every day.
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