What is the worst movie you\'ve ever seen?
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My worst movie was the most violent movie. I am a moviegoer, so I enjoy watching movies at the cinema rather than at the home theater. I very often go to the cinema and also enjoy the atmosphere of the cinema which is dark with coke and popcorn. It means I stay in the cinema until the movie ends however terrible the movies would be. However, the movie that I watched when I was in high school was only one exception to make me come out in the middle. The movie was full of murder, hitting, attacks, etc. I couldn\'t help going out because of too deadly and violent stories and scenes. I couldn\'t focus on the stream of stories, so I can\'t still remember what the movie was about, and even the title. The only one I remember is too shocking, I had nightmares for some time after a while. Nowadays, I don\'t like movies including too violent elements.
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름]g!^^
Thank you for doing your homework.
The way you described the movie, one thing came to my mind, it was gruesome.
My imagination is too active, so I don\'t watch anything that would give me nightmares.
Andrea
My worst movie was the most violent movie.
>> The worst movie for me was the most violent movie I have watched.
I am a moviegoer, so I enjoy watching movies at the cinema rather than at the home theater.
>> I am a moviegoer, I enjoy watching movies in the movie theater rather than at home.
I very often go to the cinema and also enjoy the atmosphere of the cinema which is dark with coke and popcorn.
>> I often go to cinemas and enjoy the atmosphere of it, a dark place while having coke and popcorn.
It means I stay in the cinema until the movie ends however terrible the movies would be.
>> It means, I stay in the cinema until the movie ends even how terrible the movie would be.
However, the movie that I watched when I was in high school was only one exception to make me come out in the middle.
>> However, the movie that I I\'ve watched when I was in high school was the only exception that I needed to go out in the middle of the movie.
The movie was full of murder, hitting, attacks, etc.
>> The movie was full of murder\'s, violence, attacks, etc.
I couldn\'t help going out because of too deadly and violent stories and scenes.
>> I couldn\'t help going out because the fatality was too high, brutal story and scenes.
I couldn\'t focus on the stream of stories, so I can\'t still remember what the movie was about, and even the title.
>> I couldn\'t focus on the stream of the story, I still couldn\'t remember what the movie was about, not even the title.
The only one I remember is too shocking, I had nightmares for some time after a while.
>> The only thig I remember, it was too shocking, I had nightmares for quite sometime.
Nowadays, I don\'t like movies including too violent elements.
>> Nowadays, I don\'t like movies that includes traumatizing elements.
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