What is the worst news you\'ve ever heard in South Korea?

2022-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I\'ve ever heard the worst news that is a ferry Sewol accident. It\'s the news that the ferry was flooded, and then I felt sad because younger brother of my friend had there.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic:)

Ohh :( I\'ve heard about this news and it made me heartbroken. It\'s such a tragic incident. I feel bad for your friends. It must\'ve been really hard on them. Let\'s home that this won\'t happen again.

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I\'ve ever heard the worst news that is a ferry Sewol accident.

>> The worst news that I\'ve heard is about the Sewol ferry accident.

It\'s the news that the ferry was flooded, and then I felt sad because younger brother of my friend had there.

>> It is where the ferry sank down the ocean. I felt sad because the younger brother of my friend was there.

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