What is the worst problem you have ever faced in your life and how did you handle it?
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What is the worst problem you have ever faced in your life and how did you handle it?
When I failed my college exam, I felt hopeless.
In our countriy, going to college is important issue in our life.
I was worried about my future.
Finally, I have overcome the difficuties, I have to study for one additional year.
I entered the colleage with my effort in the next year.
Now I am satisfied with my life.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
These kinds of stories are nice to look back at. There would always be a point in our lives wherein we have big problems and then we eventually resolve it. It shows how determined we are to straight things out. :)
When I failed my college exam, I felt hopeless.
>> CORRECT
In our countriy, going to college is important issue in our life.
>>In our country, entering a university is an important step in our life.
I was worried about my future.
>> CORRECT
Finally, I have overcome the difficuties, I have to study for one additional year.
>> Finally, I have overcome the difficulties and studied for an additional year.
I entered the colleage with my effort in the next year.
>> I entered a good college with all my best efforts the next year.
Now I am satisfied with my life.
>> Now, I am satisfied with my life.
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