What is the worst thing parents can do to their children?
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I think the violence is the worst thing that parents ca do their children.
Because the children have the emotion, they can feel they are not respected.
In any case, the violence is not permitted.
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Good morning, Mr. [이름].
How are you? We didn\'t meet today and
maybe you have some things to do.
Just take care and see you soon!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
I think the violence is the worst thing that parents ca do their children.
>> I think that violence is the worst thing that parents can do to their children.Because the children have the emotion, they can feel they are not respected.
>> Because children have emotions and they can feel that they are not respected.In any case, the violence is not permitted.
>> In any case, violence is not permitted.
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