What is the worst vacation you've ever been on?
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Hi Rose,
This is my first homework.
actually, I want to upgrade my writing skil.
So, today start write essay every day.
But, I don't have any worst vacation, because I had been a few trip.
and than I'm working now.
This is my first essay, I shuold increase contents more than everyday.
See you
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Nice to see this, Mr. [Name]!
That\'s great! You also have to improve your writing skill^^
Hi Rose,>>CORRECT!This is my first homework.>>CORRECT!actually, I want to upgrade my writing skil.>>Actually, I want to upgrade my writing skill.So, today start write essay every day.>>So today, I am going to start writing an essay every day.But, I don\'t have any worst vacation, because I had been a few trip and than I\'m working now.>>However, I have not had any worst vacation because I have only been in a few trips and then I am woking now.This is my first essay, I shuold increase contents more than everyday.>>This is my first essay, I should add more every day.See you
>>See you!
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