what is there in my house

2011-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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when you open the door, you see a single bed, desk and closet and so on in my room my bed is placed next to wall and there are desk and closet across from the bed Big mirror that can be moved is also laid next to closet because begore i go to work i have to adjust my dress --- i live in residential area so there is beautigul park and school. i often go to the park for jogging supermarket where i buy groceries is near my house so i am often given convenient service --- there is newly-built library the building is built morden-looking when i entered the library, i saw clean and orderly interior and cutting edge computer system when i go there for syduy and reading books i always feel very comfortable

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Hi [이름]! It was a pleasure to meet you! Thank you for trying your best to write something here. I wrote my corrections in red text. Please feel free to ask questions tomorrow! Goodnight! -   Teacher Kristel -   when you open the door, you see a single bed, desk and closet and so on in my room>> When you open the door, you will see a single bed, a desk and a closet. You will see my room.my bed is placed next to wall and there are desk and closet across from the bed >> My bed is beside the wall and my desk and closet are across my bed.Big mirror that can be moved is also laid next to closet because begore i go to work i have to adjust my dress >> A big mirror that can be moved can be found next to my closet because I’d like to see how my outfit looks like before I go the office.i live in residential area so there is beautigul park  and school. >> I live in a residential area where you can see a beautiful park and a school. i often go to the park for jogging. >> I often go to the park to jog. supermarket where i buy groceries is near my house >> The supermarket, where I buy my groceries, is near my house.so i am often given convenient service >> It is very convenient for me.there is newly-built library the building is built morden-looking >> There is a newly built library in our place. It looks modern.when i entered the library, i saw clean and orderly interior  and cutting edge computer system >> When I entered the library, I saw a clean and orderly interior. I also saw a cutting edge computer system.when i go there for syduy and reading books i always feel very comfortable>> I always feel comfortable whenever I go there to study and read books.

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