What is traditional food in your country?

2024-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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I want to introduce 2 foods. One is chicken soup, and the other is [이름]bob. Chicken soup is a very popular food in summer, and foreigners like it too. I especially like the muddy-style soup, which has lots of nuts. The restaurant\'s name is Gobong or Tosokchon. [이름]bob is also a globally popular food. I saw the news that many people buy ice [이름]bob in America. [이름]bob is tasty and simple. In addition, it is healthy.

강사 첨삭

Hi, MK!
Thank you for doing your homework. I\'ve tried eating [이름]bap and I really like it, but I haven\'t tried Samgyetang yet, so I\'m looking forward to trying it soon.
- T. Caitlyn
I want to introduce 2 foods.
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One is chicken soup, and the other is [이름]bob.
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Chicken soup is a very popular food in summer, and foreigners like it too.
>> Chicken soup is very popular in the summer, and foreigners like it too.
I especially like the muddy-style soup, which has lots of nuts. 
>> CORRECT
The restaurant\'s name is Gobong or Tosokchon.
>> CORRECT
[이름]bob is also a globally popular food.
>> CORRECT
I saw the news that many people buy ice [이름]bob in America.
>> CORRECT
[이름]bob is tasty and simple. 
>> CORRECT
In addition, it is healthy.
>> CORRECT

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