What is trick-or-treating? Why do children do it? What rules should children follow when they go tri
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I think the most children don\'t follow trick-or-treating in South Korea.
Because Korea is start Itaewon disaster start in Halloween.
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What is trick-or-treating? Why do children do it? What rules should children follow when they go trick-or-treating?
I think the most children don\'t follow trick-or-treating in South Korea.
Because Korea is start Itaewon disaster start in Halloween.
>>> I think most children in South Korea don’t go trick-or-treating anymore, especially after the Itaewon disaster that happened on Halloween.
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