What is true beauty?
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Great point!
\"Don\'t judge a book by it\'s cover\", correct!
Amazing composition today, [이름]. It\'s short and very expressive.
Keep it up! Consistency is key.
~Teacher Eve.
Many people say that the first impression is important.
>> Correct!
I think it means appearance is really important when we judge people for the first time.
>> I think it means that appearance is really important when we judge people for the first time.
However, don\'t forget that appearance is regarded as the most important element when we meet people for the \"first time.\"
>> Correct!
It is because beauty is skin deep.
>> Correct!
I want to give you an example.
>> Correct!
You may meet your friend.
>> Correct!
Do you judge your friend\'s face all the time?
>> Correct!
I think you don\'t.
>> Correct!
It\'s because I and my friend become friends because we get along well.
>> It\'s because my friend and I are friends because we get along well.
You don\'t make your best friend because he or she looks nice.
>> You\'re not best friends because he or she looks nice.
You focus on skin deep.
>> Correct!
We can\'t deny that appearance has really big power when think of beauty.
>> We can\'t deny that appearance has a really big power when think of beauty.
However, true beauty is from our mind.
>> Correct!
Let\'s guess that you see a pretty person who has poor mind and an ugly person who has good mind.
>> Let\'s imagine that you\'re seeing a pretty person who has poor mind and an ugly person who has good mind.
Then, you are asked: Who is more beautiful?
>> Correct!
I convince that you say the latter one is beautiful.
>> I\'m convinced that you will say that the latter one is beautiful.
It is hard to say don\'t judge people by their appearnce, but don\'t judge people just by their appearance!
>> It is hard to say \"don\'t judge people by their appearance\", but don\'t judge people just by their appearance!
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