what is true freedom for you??

2014-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Myra

학생이 쓴 원문

The truth is my true freedom that I'm abie to do averything what I can doing. ~~~My teacher Myla~~~ I'm sorry for you because I have a bad to speaking English.So somtimes, you can feel a unhappy by my it. Once more again,I'm sorry.

강사 첨삭

Hello my very kind student, Mr. [이름]! :))

Hope you\'re doing all right in there.
I know it\'s getting chilly there so, wear something thicker.
Don\'t get sick :))

Mr. [이름], do not feel bad about it. Please don\'t say sorry.
I am here to listen and help you out.
I\'m not bad if you cannot explain something well.
Actually, you are improving!

Do not hesitate in telling what you think, okay? :)
YOU CAN DO IT!!!

Catch you later!
Teacher Myra

The truth is my true freedom that I\'m abie to do averything what I can doing.
>>
True freedom for me is when I\'m able to do everything what I can do.
I\'m sorry for you because I have a bad to speaking English.So somtimes, you can feel a unhappy by my it. Once more again,I\'m sorry.
>>I\'m sorry because I\'m not good in speaking English.So sometimes, you feel unhappy with it. Once again, I\'m sorry.

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