What is you phobia and why?
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When I was younger, I didn\'t like spider because of a creepy insect. The funny thing is that I like a Spider man in movie. And now the thing that I have an phobia is the Anthrophobia. It doesn\'t look like that as I\'m getting older , I\'m lo[이름]g confidence because I got failed a lot such as moving another company, keeping a relationship and making friends. So I feel a phobia to meet with other people.
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Wishing you a happy Friday, Elic! Nice to meet you. Enjoy life no matter how hard it may seem. When life gives you a thousand reasons to cry, show the world that you have a million reasons to smile. ^^
When I was younger, I didn\'t like spider because of a creepy insect.
>> When I was younger, I didn\'t like spiders because they were creepy.
The funny thing is that I like a Spider man in movie.
>> But the funny thing is I like the movie Spiderman.
And now the thing that I have an phobia is the Anthrophobia.
>> Right now my phobia is the fear of people or Anthropophobia.
It doesn\'t look like that as I\'m getting older , I\'m lo[이름]g confidence because I got failed a lot such as moving another company, keeping a relationship and making friends. So I feel a phobia to meet with other people.
>> As I\'m getting older, I\'m suddenly lo[이름]g my self confidence because of my failures in life such as moving to another company, keeping a relationship, and making friends. So, that makes me Anthropophagic.
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