What is your all-time favorite movie and what can you learn from it?

2022-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I have to say it\'s the \"catch me if you can\" of my favorite movie. I learned a lot of things like the environment that you grew up in and how much you grew up receiving love from your parents. Especially, You have to be smart to cheat.

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Hi Elic!
 
That sounds like a great movie. I would like to watch that to experience myself. 

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I have to say it\'s the \"catch me if you can\" of my favorite movie. 
>> I have to say that the movie \"Catch me if you can\" is my favorite. 

I learned a lot of things like the environment that you grew up in and how much you grew up receiving love from your parents. 
>> I learned a lot of things like looking back at the environment that you grew up in and knowing how much love you receive from your parents. 

Especially, You have to be smart to cheat.
>> Especially, you have to be smart to cheat. 

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