What is your all-time favorite movie and what can you learn from it?

2022-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think my all-time favorite movies are mystery movies. I like some mystery books, and because of it, I like mystery movies too. And also I like some dark hero movies like Batman. I think those kinds of movies are well-consisted so the stories are really interesting. And also the levels of completeness of the movies are really great. And because of these reasons, I like mystery movies or dark hero movies.

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Hi [이름]!

Those a great genres!

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I think my all-time favorite movies are mystery movies.

>> CORRECT

I like some mystery books, and because of it, I like mystery movies too.

>> I like some mystery books. With that, I like mystery movies too.

And also I like some dark hero movies like Batman.

>> Also, I like some dark hero movies like \"Batman\".

I think those kinds of movies are well-consisted so the stories are really interesting.

>> CORRECT

And also the levels of completeness of the movies are really great.

>> Also, the completeness of the movies are great.

And because of these reasons, I like mystery movies or dark hero movies.

>> Because of these reasons, I like mystery and dark hero movies.

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