What is your all-time favorite movie and what can you learn from it?

2022-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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What is your all-time favorite movie and what can you learn from it? My favorite movie is Taitanic. This is a pretty old movie but this movie reminds of my memories a lot. It was my most interesting and beautiful movie that I seen.

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I cried a river when I watched that movie. It\'s a classic. Good choice!

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My favorite movie is Taitanic.

>> My favorite movies is \"Titanic\".

This is a pretty old movie but this movie reminds of my memories a lot.

>> This is a pretty old movie but it reminds me of a lot of things.

It was my most interesting and beautiful movie that I seen.

>> It is the most interesting and beautiful movie that I have ever seen.

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