What is your all-time favorite movie and what can you learn from it?
학생이 쓴 원문
many variety of movies influenced to me. and stories of the movies are similar with my piece of life and my ideal life.
my favorite movie is \"ABOUT TIME\". It\'s a romance movie. it\'s a story that a man who can control time tries to confess his love to a woman and they fell in love together in the end. actually in a latter part of movie, it focuses on a definition of happiness. and i am impressed with it. it says that happiness comes from a moment of right now and the moment together with my people i love. so live the moment fully. i cannot agree with the opinion more. after watching that movie, my motto of life is to spend the time given to me significantly and sincerely.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Wow, that\'s very inspiring. It is rich in lessons about life. I might watch it. Thanks!
PS: Always make sure that the first letter in a sentence should be capitalized. :)
many variety of movies influenced to me.
>> There is a wide variety of movies that influenced me.
and stories of the movies are similar with my piece of life and my ideal life.
>>Those stories have a similar piece in my ideal life.
my favorite movie is \"ABOUT TIME\".
>> My favorite one is the movie, \"About Time\".
It\'s a romance movie.
>> CORRECT
it\'s a story that a man who can control time tries to confess his love to a woman and they fell in love together in the end.
>> It\'s a story of a man who can control time and confesses to the woman that he loves. They fell in love together in the end.
actually in a latter part of movie, it focuses on a definition of happiness. and i am impressed with it.
>> Actually , n a latter part of movie, it focuses on the definition of happiness and I was impressed.
it says that happiness comes from a moment of right now and the moment together with my people i love.
>> It says that happiness comes from a moment of right now and the moments together with people that I love.
so live the moment fully. i cannot agree with the opinion more.
>> This is why we should live every moment fully. I can\'t agree with it more.
after watching that movie, my motto of life is to spend the time given to me significantly and sincerely.
>> After watching that movie, my motto in life is to spend the time given to me significantly and sincerely.
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