What is your attitude towards smoking?

2018-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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i don't oppose the smoking. just i think smokers have to keep their manners. they must not smoke at a nonsmoking area and street. because it is harmful to the others health. especially for pregnant women and children. so i think if they keep smoking manners, it is okay they are smoking.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! You\'re right. I personally don\'t mind it when someone smokes, but I do mind when they smoke near me.

~T. Elisha

i don\'t oppose the smoking.

>> I don\'t oppose smoking.
 just i think smokers have to keep their manners.
>>  I just think that smokers have to keep their manners.
they must not smoke at a nonsmoking area and street.

>> correct!

or:

>>> They must not smoke at a nonsmoking area and street.

>> They must not smoke at nonsmoking areas and streets.
 because it is harmful to the others health.
especially for pregnant women and children.
>> It is harmful to others especially to pregnant women and children.
so i think if they keep smoking manners,
it is okay they are smoking.

>> As long as they have manners, it is okay to smoke.

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