What is your average hours of sleep? Do you think it\'s enough?
학생이 쓴 원문
Let me think about it, normally I fall asleep around 12:30 PM and wake up 7:00 AM, so it’s about 6 hours and half. I think, it’s average sleeping hours for average business man. but it\'s not enough!
In day time, I hope to get sleep more tonight but It\'s changed at night like that spending time for sleep is a kind of waste of time. so I stay up late but unfortunately, I would regret it just after waking up in the next day morning.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Good day [이름] [이름]!
I hope that you got enough sleep last night. I also think that if there was one human biological way to reduce is sleep as there are so many things we can do if we slept less.
Six and a half hours is not bad for a business man indeed.
See you in class later then.
-T. Donna =)
>>Correct!
Or: I think, it’s the average sleeping hours for an average business man. But it\'s not enough!
In day time, I hope to get sleep more tonight but It\'s changed at night like that spending time for sleep is a kind of waste of time. so I stay up late but unfortunately, I would regret it just after waking up in the next day morning.
>> In the day time, I hope to get sleep more at night but It\'s changed at night like that spending time for sleep is a kind of waste of time. So I stay up late, unfortunately, I would regret it just after waking up the next morning.
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