What is your best achievement in your life so far?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Thank you for your passionate lesson.
Flankly, I don\'t know how to reply for your question, because I had a lot of thing to achieve something.
Is your mean for sales achievement? or sueecssful life?
if your question is sales achievement in my sales career, I would like to talk about sales promotion in University hospital.
Five years ago, I promoted a hemotology instrument to the University Hospital customer.
They used TLA system(total laboratory automation system)but we didn\'t have the automation system as like competitor.
but I tried sales promotion and I had a order from the customer. My boss said it was impossible story to me at the time and I could not believe this sales achievement too. but I did.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]
Is your mean for sales achievement? or sueecssful life?
Five years ago, I promoted a hemotology instrument to the University Hospital customer.
They used TLA system(total laboratory automation system)but we didn\'t have the automation system as like competitor.
but I tried sales promotion and I had a order from the customer. My boss said it was impossible story to me at the time and I could not believe this sales achievement too. but I did.
See you later in our class
Dear [Name],
Thank you for your passionate lesson.
Flankly, I don\'t know how to reply for your question, because I had a lot of thing to achieve something.
Thank you for your passionate lesson.
Flankly, I don\'t know how to reply for your question, because I had a lot of thing to achieve something.
>> Frankly, I don\'t know how to reply your question because I achieved a lot of things.
Is your mean for sales achievement? or sueecssful life?
>> Are you referring to my sales achievement or success in life?
if your question is sales achievement in my sales career, I would like to talk about sales promotion in University hospital.
if your question is sales achievement in my sales career, I would like to talk about sales promotion in University hospital.
>> if your question is about sales achievement in my sales career, I would like to talk about my sales promotion in University hospital.
Five years ago, I promoted a hemotology instrument to the University Hospital customer.
>> Five years ago, I was promoted as a hematology instrument to the University Hospital.
They used TLA system(total laboratory automation system)but we didn\'t have the automation system as like competitor.
>> They used TLA system(total laboratory automation system)but we didn\'t have the automation system unlike our competitor.
but I tried sales promotion and I had a order from the customer. My boss said it was impossible story to me at the time and I could not believe this sales achievement too. but I did.
>> but I tried sales promotion and I had an order from a customer. My boss said it was an impossible story at the time and I could not believe this sales achievement too but I did it
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