What is your best birthday memory?
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Q:What is your best birthday memory?
-> Every years, I get good memories my birthday.
When I 20's always get party with my friends.
but, maybe 3years ago, I started date with my wife.
We are Eating dinner together or we went to some special places.
Thank you.
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Q:What is your best birthday memory?
-> Every years, I get good memories my birthday.
We are Eating dinner together or we went to some special places.
-> Every years, I get good memories my birthday.
>> Every year, I get good memories for my birthday.
When I 20\'s always get party with my friends.
When I 20\'s always get party with my friends.
>>When I was on my 20\'s, I always get to party with my friends.
but, maybe 3years ago, I started date with my wife.
but, maybe 3years ago, I started date with my wife.
>>Around, 3 years ago, I started dating my wife.
OR
>>Around, 3 years ago, I started to date my wife.
We are Eating dinner together or we went to some special places.
We are eating dinner together and we go to some special places.
Thank you.
Thank you.
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