What is your best experience in life?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would have to say it was a trip with my family or friends anywhere. Sometimes, even if the weather didn\'t go well during the trip, as time went by, even that became a memory. So I will make many memories with them.
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic!
That\'s a very nice memory. You guys should continue making more.
I would have to say it was a trip with my family or friends anywhere.
>> I would have to say that best memories that I have is when I go on trips with my family and friends.
Sometimes, even if the weather didn\'t go well during the trip, as time went by, even that became a memory.
>> Sometimes, even if the weather is not good during the trip, everything goes well and stays in our memory.
So I will make many memories with them.
>> This is why I will continue making memories with them.
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