What is your best experience in life?
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What is your best experience in life?
When I went abroad for the first time in Singapore.
I made my flight and planned my travel itinerary.
I remembered that time. I was talked to foreigners, I was tongue-tied nervousness and couldn\'t speak well.
Time passed, I was able to speak naturally.
I was a little bit difficult travel, but one of the best experiences I had.
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Hi [이름]!
That sounds like a great trip! :)
When I went abroad for the first time in Singapore.
>> My best experience is when I went to Singapore for the first time.
I made my flight and planned my travel itinerary.
>> I had a flight and planned my travel itinerary.
I remembered that time.
>> CORRECT
I was talked to foreigners, I was tongue-tied nervousness and couldn\'t speak well.
>> I was talked to foreigners and I was tongue-tied nervousness because couldn\'t speak well.
Time passed, I was able to speak naturally.
>> As time passed, I was able to speak naturally.
I was a little bit difficult travel, but one of the best experiences I had.
>> It was a little bit difficult to travel, but it\'s still one of the best experiences I had.
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