What is your best experience in life? Explain why.
학생이 쓴 원문
My best experience in my life is when I had a first friend in the school.
When I was 5 to 6 year old kid, I had a first friend in forever.
It means that I had a person who can talk freely and play together.
So I think it is my best experience in my life.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
That sounds great! Making friends is always a good thing.
My best experience in my life is when I had a first friend in the school.
>> CORRECT
When I was 5 to 6 year old kid, I had a first friend in forever.
>> When I was 5 to 6 year old kid, I had a friend for the first time in forever.
It means that I had a person who can talk freely and play together.
>> It means that I had a person whom I can talk freely and play together with.
So I think it is my best experience in my life.
>> CORRECT
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