What is your best memory in school and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
The fifth grade in elementary school is my best memory in school.
Because when I was fifth grade, there was many friends in my class.
And my homeroom teacher was very kind, and bright.
And it was before the Covid-19, so I could play with my friend freely.
So I think it is my best memory in school.
Now, its the age of Covid-19, so I can\'t meet with my friends freely.
But Covid-19 will be ended, and if it does, I can meet with my classmates freely.
So I wnat to make more good memories in school after Covid-19.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! We all have good memories in school that we can cherish for a life time. Some of them may not be as good as we expect it to be but it let us grow to the person we are today. Thanks for sharing yours :)
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The fifth grade in elementary school is my best memory in school.
>>The best memory I had in school was when I was in fifth grade because I had so many friends during that time.
Because when I was fifth grade, there was many friends in my class.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
And my homeroom teacher was very kind, and bright.
>> And my homeroom teacher was very kind and bright.
And it was before the Covid-19, so I could play with my friend freely.
>> During that time, there was no COVID-19 so I could play with my friend freely.
So I think it is my best memory in school.
>> So I that it is my best memory in school.
Now, its the age of Covid-19, so I can\'t meet with my friends freely.
>> CORRECT
But Covid-19 will be ended, and if it does, I can meet with my classmates freely.
>> Although when COVID comes to an end, I can meet with my classmates freely.
So I wnat to make more good memories in school after Covid-19.
>> So I want to make more good memories in school after Covid-19.
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