What is your best personality trait?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I have endurance. so I do something for a long time.
It\'s very important factor in a life.
If someone wants a get a result in any sector, someone have to do something for a longtime.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your best personality. Keep doing what you do best.
~Kelly^^
I think I have endurance. so I do something for a long time.
>> I think I have endurance so I do something for a long time.
It\'s very important factor in a life.
>> It\'s a very important factor in life.
If someone wants a get a result in any sector, someone have to do something for a longtime.
>> If someone wants a get a good result in any thing, he/she must do something for a long time.
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