What is your best school memory and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t remember because it\'s been so long, but looking back when I hang out with my friends during playing basketball at high school. at that time, I didn\'t worry about anything else like getting a job, getting married, making my own house and far future. I just like that time, when I didn\'t have any worries. As I\'m getting old, I think how to live well and continue. And worrying about future, moving to another company, all about it.
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic:)
I don\'t remember because it\'s been so long, but looking back when I hang out with my friends during playing basketball at high school.
>> I don\'t remember because it\'s been so long, but looking back into my memories, I think it is hanging out with my friends and playing basketball in our school.
at that time, I didn\'t worry about anything else like getting a job, getting married, making my own house and far future.
>> At that time, I didn\'t worry about anything else like getting a job, getting married, making my own house and worrying about my future.
I just like that time, when I didn\'t have any worries.
>> I like those times wherein I didn\'t have any worries.
As I\'m getting old, I think how to live well and continue.
>> As I am getting old, I know now how to live well.
And worrying about future, moving to another company, all about it.
>> I worry about things like my future, moving to another company and many more.
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