What is your best weekend ever? Do you always plan for the weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, I do.
My best weekend was this February.
You know I went to Hong Kong and Macao with two of my best friends for graduation trip. That day was from Thursday to Monday.
That weekend was the best ever for me.
I experienced and enjoyed a lot.
Most of all, I really liked the night view of Hong Kong.
It made me overwhelming.
And that travel made me relax from the work that I\'ve been doing. And made our friendship strong.
But you know what, I don\'t usually plan for the weekend.
I made my plan suddenly, Expect meeting my friends and teachers.
Actually, it depends on my mood. If I wanna go alone when I go somewhere in Seoul.
And if I wanna go out with somebody else, I go with my mom or dad. Cuz my friends are busy these days lol.
As a result, I don\'t always plan for the weekend.
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Of course, I do.>>> Correct.
My best weekend was this February.
My best weekend was this February.
>>> My best weekend happened last February.
You know I went to Hong Kong and Macao with two of my best friends for graduation trip.
You know I went to Hong Kong and Macao with two of my best friends for graduation trip.
>>> You know I went to Hong Kong and Macao with two of my best friends for a graduation trip.
That day was from Thursday to Monday.
>>> Those days fell on a Thursday, Friday, Saturday, Sunday and Monday.
That weekend was the best ever for me.
That weekend was the best ever for me.
>>> Correct.
I experienced and enjoyed a lot.
I experienced and enjoyed a lot.
>>> Correct.
Most of all, I really liked the night view of Hong Kong.
Most of all, I really liked the night view of Hong Kong.
>>> Correct.
It made me overwhelming.
It made me overwhelming.
>>> It was overwhelming for me.
And that travel made me relax from the work that I\'ve been doing.
And that travel made me relax from the work that I\'ve been doing.
>>> Correct.
And made our friendship strong.
>>> And made our friendship stronger.
But you know what, I don\'t usually plan for the weekend.
>>> And made our friendship stronger.
But you know what, I don\'t usually plan for the weekend.
>>> Correct.
I made my plan suddenly, Expect meeting my friends and teachers.
I made my plan suddenly, Expect meeting my friends and teachers.
>>> I make plans in the spur of the moment except when meeting my friends and teachers.
Actually, it depends on my mood.
Actually, it depends on my mood.
>>> Correct.
If I wanna go alone when I go somewhere in Seoul.
>>> Sometimes, I just go somewhere in Seoul when I feel like going.
And if I wanna go out with somebody else, I go with my mom or dad.
And if I wanna go out with somebody else, I go with my mom or dad.
>>> Correct.
Coz’ my friends are busy these days lol.
>>> Correct.
As a result, I don\'t always plan for the weekend.
As a result, I don\'t always plan for the weekend.
>>> Correct.
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