What is your biggest dream in life?
학생이 쓴 원문
My biggest dream? Obviously, it\'s conquering the world as an Aircraft Technician. I want to receive suggestions a lot from in the world, if I succeed something that is sensational and unbelievable a invention.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Elic! You are interested in learning, listens attentively, and makes a solid effort to avoid distractions that could interrupt the learning process. You show responsibility and follows directions whenever they are given. Keep up the good work. AWESOME.
My biggest dream? Obviously, it\'s conquering the world as an Aircraft Technician.
>>> My biggest dream? Obviously, it\'s conquering the world as an aircraft technician.
I want to receive suggestions a lot from in the world, if I succeed something that is sensational and unbelievable a invention.
>>> If I succeed in creating something sensational and unbelievable, I would like to receive a lot of suggestions from all over the world.
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