What is your biggest fear?

2019-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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My biggest fear is losing my nearest and dearest. I can\'t even imagine if they die or get hurt. I feel almost same feeling when I feel distance or unfriendliness from them as well. When I and some of my friend are estranged each other, I am really sad. If I could, I would like to avoid this situation.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


I appreciate all your efforts! :)


T. Lainey <\",)))><


HOMEWORK:


My biggest fear is losing my nearest and dearest.

>>> My biggest fear is losing people dearest to me.


 I can\'t even imagine if they die or get hurt.

>>> correct


 I feel almost same feeling when I feel distance or unfriendliness from them as well.

>>> I almost feel the same way when I feel that they are distant to me.


 When I and some of my friend are estranged each other, I am really sad.

>>> When a friend of mine is distant to me, I feel really sad.


 If I could, I would like to avoid this situation.

>>> correct

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