What is your biggest fear?
학생이 쓴 원문
My biggest fear is losing my nearest and dearest.
I can\'t even imagine if they die or get hurt.
I feel almost same feeling when I feel distance or unfriendliness from them as well.
When I and some of my friend are estranged each other, I am really sad.
If I could, I would like to avoid this situation.
강사 첨삭
Hi Su ^^
I appreciate all your efforts! :)
T. Lainey <\",)))><
HOMEWORK:
My biggest fear is losing my nearest and dearest.
>>> My biggest fear is losing people dearest to me.
I can\'t even imagine if they die or get hurt.
>>> correct
I feel almost same feeling when I feel distance or unfriendliness from them as well.
>>> I almost feel the same way when I feel that they are distant to me.
When I and some of my friend are estranged each other, I am really sad.
>>> When a friend of mine is distant to me, I feel really sad.
If I could, I would like to avoid this situation.
>>> correct
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