What is your biggest fear for yourself?
학생이 쓴 원문
I feel scary about the future.
For example, These days we don\'t have a guarantee for a job until retire.
So, many people worried about future.
In conclusion, my fear is about a living
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!^^
I hope that we can have a good life after retirement so we can fully enjoy our time.
~Kelly^^
I feel scary about the future.>> I feel scared about the future.
For example, These days we don\'t have a guarantee for a job until retire.
For example, These days we don\'t have a guarantee for a job until retire.
>> For example, these days we don\'t have a guarantee for a job until retirement.
So, many people worried about future.
So, many people worried about future.
>> So, many people are worried about the future.
In conclusion, my fear is about a living
In conclusion, my fear is about a living
>> In conclusion, my fear is about living and surviving.
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