What is your biggest fear for yourself?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think my biggest fear is death because if I die, so my family is sad and I can\'t play with my friends.
And I got the highest score N on my psychological test.
《N:fear, Trauma and stress》
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What is your biggest fear for yourself?
I think my biggest fear is death because if I die, so my family is sad and I can\'t play with my friends.
>> I think my biggest fear is death because if I die, my family will be sad and I can\'t play with my friends.
And I got the highest score N on my psychological test.
《N: fear, Trauma, and stress》
>> CORRECT~~
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