What is your biggest goal in life?
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your biggest goal in life?
Today better than yesterday.
When I was young I didn’t interested in study at school. Also I really don’t want to study or learn at school because school is so boring But my mother didn’t give up (my education) Nonetheless my family doesn’t have much money at the time.
Therefore I want to make a lot money, slow life, take care of my family and getting along with my friends. I want to travel with my family because I didn’t spend much time with my family so I wish my family make memories.
강사 첨삭
Hi! Yeong^^
I want you to take a look at your composition and then try to determine your error.
Please practice them
Today better than yesterday.
>> Today is better than yesterday.
When I was young I didn’t interested in study at school. Also I really don’t want to study or learn at school because school is so boring But my mother didn’t give up (my education) Nonetheless my family doesn’t have much money at the time.
>>When I was young I am not interested in studying at school because it is so boring. But my mother didn’t give up to convince me to go to school and that time my family doesn’t have much money at the time.
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