What is your biggest goal in life?

Great writing Jamie! You should consider being a writer. Thank you for answering your homework today. I’m looking forward to talking with you in class again.

~Teacher Eve.

  The biggest goal in my life is to love myself unconditionally. 

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 Whenever I do something, I compare myself with others and only see the weakness of mine.

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 In this way, I have became unconfident and emotionally unstable, and finally I missed many of good chances.

>> In this way, I have become unconfident and emotionally unstable, and lastly, I missed many good chances.

>> OR: Because of this, I have become unconfident and emotionally unstable, and lastly, I missed many good chances.
 Then at some point I felt that this kind of mindset could ruin my life so I need to change my mind.

>> Then at some point, I felt that this kind of mindset could ruin my life so I need to change my mind.
 I read some books written by so-called successful men and I realized that most of them firmly believe themselves and love themselves.

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 After realizing that, I have tried to find several ways to love myself and have self-confidence. 

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 One of the ways for loving myself was to improve myself by studying or learning something, and that is why I knocked the door of Power English.

>> One of the ways for loving myself was to improve myself by studying or learning something, and that is why I knocked on the door of Power English.