What is your biggest regret in your life and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a kid, I had many regrets.
But now, I don\'t have that much regrets.
If I have a regret, it can cause a bad emotion and I will have more and more regrets because of the regret.
And those regrets will make many bad emotions and it will be a vicious cycle.
So nowadays, I don\'t usually have a regret.
If I get a regret, I try to forget it and I don\'t think about it so it can\'t cause any bad emotions.
강사 첨삭
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Regrets are part of our life. Generally, it makes us feel bad but it also allows us to reflect on our actions.
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>> CORRECT
But now, I don\'t have that much regrets.
>> CORRECT
If I have a regret, it can cause a bad emotion and I will have more and more regrets because of the regret.
>> If I regret something, it can cause some bad emotions and I will regret the things that I might do because of it.
And those regrets will make many bad emotions and it will be a vicious cycle.
>> It will make a vicious cycle.
So nowadays, I don\'t usually have a regret.
>> So nowadays, I try not to regret the things that I do.
If I get a regret, I try to forget it and I don\'t think about it so it can\'t cause any bad emotions.
>> If I am about to regret something, I try not to think about it that much so that I won\'t feel any bad emotions.
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