What is your busiest day of the week?
학생이 쓴 원문
Monday is my busiest day of the week.
By doing Power English, I start a day.
I eat the breakfast simply, and read some books or online newspaper.
In the afternoon, I go to work.
After that, I meet my friends or go to work out.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Jenna! Being busy is not a bad thing. It helps you increase your energy, more productive as well as boost your mental alertness. However, make sure to take enough rest. Always do your best. I believe that you can do so much better. ~ T. Lyn
Monday is my busiest day of the week.
>>Correct.
By doing Power English, I start a day.
By doing Power English, I start a day.
>>I start my day by doing or studying English in Power English.
I eat the breakfast simply, and read some books or online newspaper.
I eat the breakfast simply, and read some books or online newspaper.
>>After my class, I eat breakfast and read some books or online newspaper.
In the afternoon, I go to work.
In the afternoon, I go to work.
>>Correct.
After that, I meet my friends or go to work out.
After that, I meet my friends or go to work out.
>>After work, I either meet my friends or go to the gym and workout.
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