What is your comfort food and why?
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My comfort food is cold bean-soup noodles. Because when I was young, on summer, I usually ate cold bean-soup noodles. My family sat together and ate it together. There were people which I love and we ate noodles which I love. I was very happy. So, now, when I eat cold bean-soup noodles, this memory occur to me. Clearly, after a few years, I will think about this memory and I will miss it.
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Hi Kimberly :)
That sounds delicious! I want to try that :)
My comfort food is cold bean-soup noodles. Because when I was young, on summer, I usually ate cold bean-soup noodles.
>> CORRECT
My family sat together and ate it together.
>> My family sat and ate it together.
There were people which I love and we ate noodles which I love.
>> I usually eat this with the people that I love.
I was very happy.
>> CORRECT
So, now, when I eat cold bean-soup noodles, this memory occur to me.
>> So when I eat cold bean-soup noodles, this memory occurs to me.
Clearly, after a few years, I will think about this memory and I will miss it.
>> Clearly after a few years, I will think about this memory and miss it.
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