What is your daily routine during the weekdays? Explain briefly.
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I wake up at 7 a.m or 7:30 a.m.
And I eat breakfast made by my mom, and then I take a wash at 7:45 a.m.
And then I prepare to go to school and I have little free time.
At 8:20 a.m, I go in front of the elementary school and I meet my friends at 8:30.
I go to the middle school and I return to my home at 3:30 or 4:20 p.m.
Then I have a little free time and then I study my homework.
Then at 6 p.m, I have my online English class.
I eat dinner at 7 p.m, I watch Netflix at about 8 p.m, Then I sleep at 10 p.m.
Those are my daily routine during the weekends.
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Your daily routine consists of all of your habits. These actions structure your day and make the difference between operating at peak efficiency and struggling to make it through a poorly-planned day. So we need to start making good decisions on how we are going to spend our days. )
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I wake up at 7 a.m or 7:30 a.m.
>> I wake up at 7 am or 7:30 AM.
And I eat breakfast made by my mom, and then I take a wash at 7:45 a.m.
>> And then, I eat the breakfast that my mom makes. After that, I take a shower at 7:45 AM.
And then I prepare to go to school and I have little free time.
>> Eventually, I prepare for school and have a little free time.
At 8:20 a.m, I go in front of the elementary school and I meet my friends at 8:30.
>> I go the entrance of the elementary at 8:20 AM and wait for my friends until 8:30 AM.
I go to the middle school and I return to my home at 3:30 or 4:20 p.m.
>> We reach our middle school afterwards. I usually come home at 3:30 or 4:20 PM.
Then I have a little free time and then I study my homework.
>> CORRECT
Then at 6 p.m, I have my online English class.
>> CORRECT
I eat dinner at 7 p.m, I watch Netflix at about 8 p.m, Then I sleep at 10 p.m.
>> I eat dinner at 7 pm and I watch on Netflix by 8 pm. I usually sleep at 10 p.m..
Those are my daily routine during the weekends.
>> This is my daily routine during the weekdays.
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