What is your day to day schedule like?

2020-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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My alarm is set on 5.45 A.M, but I usually get up slightly passed 6 o’clock. After washing my face and watching morning news, I practice English pronunciation for about half an hour. Then, I have breakfast, and I go to the gym. However, I spend much more time to stretch my body than to lift weight. About 9.30 A.M, after taking a shower, I take subway to go to English study centre. With other students, we have a conversation in English for 3 hours. This is also helpful to share various opinion about social issues. In the afternoon, I return back to my house, I have lunch with my mother, and a video call talking with a foreign tutor is waiting for me. When I have this fun lesson, I am going to library nearby, but the problem is that I usually do something meaningless like watching Youtube about an hour. Once I go there, I do my homework and tasks that I should do aside from studying English. Around 8 o’clock, I come back home and I go to bed before 11.30.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you for today’s homework!

Have a great day!

Teacher ELLY.

What is your day to day schedule like?

My alarm is set on 5.45 A.M, but I usually get up slightly passed 6 o’clock.

>>My alarm is set at 5.45 A.M, but I usually get up at slightly past 6.

After washing my face and watching morning news, I practice English pronunciation for about half an hour.

>>After washing my face and watching the morning news, I practice my English pronunciation for about half an hour.

Then, I have breakfast, and I go to the gym.

CORRECT!

or>>I then eat breakfast and head to the gym for some workout.

However, I spend much more time to stretch my body than to lift weight.

>>However, I spend much of my time stretching more than lifting weights.

About 9.30 A.M, after taking a shower, I take subway to go to English study centre.

>>About 9.30 A.M, after taking a shower, I take the subway to go to the English school center.

With other students, we have a conversation in English for 3 hours.

>>With the other students, we have a conversation in English for 3 hours.

This is also helpful to share various opinion about social issues.

>>This is also helpful for me in sharing my various opinions about the social issues.

In the afternoon, I return back to my house, I have lunch with my mother, and a video call talking with a foreign tutor is waiting for me.

>>In the afternoon, I return home, have lunch with my mother, and have a video call with a foreign tutor, who is waiting for me.

When I have this fun lesson, I am going to library nearby, but the problem is that I usually do something meaningless like watching Youtube about an hour.

>>When I have this fun lesson, I go to the library nearby, but the problem is that I usually do something meaningless thing like watching YouTube for about an hour.

Once I go there, I do my homework and tasks that I should do aside from studying English.

>>Once I go there, I do my homework and tasks that have to be done aside from studying English.

or>>Once I go there, I work on my homework and tasks that needs to be done aside from my English class.

Around 8 o’clock, I come back home and I go to bed before 11.30.

CORRECT!

or>>By 8 P.M., I go home. After a while, I normally go to bed before 11.30.

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