What is your definition of success and failure in life?

2022-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think the failure is a step to success. In my definition, when I experience a failure, I should find to learn something like why I failed the interview? or what I\'m lack of, So these experiences make me more strong and finally success.

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You have a very positive mindset. We should always learn from these things [이름]ce it makes us a better version of ourselves.

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I think the failure is a step to success.

>>I think failure is a step to success.

In my definition, when I experience a failure, I should find to learn something like why I failed the interview? or what I\'m lack of,
>> In my opinion, when I experience failure, I should find know the reason behind it and know how to improve myself and fix the things I lack in.

So these experiences make me more strong and finally success.
>> So these experiences make me more stronger and meet success in life.

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