What is your definition of success and failure in life?

2022-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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What is your definition of success and failure in life? Success is obtaining your goals, and failure is not. But, I don\'t think failure has a negative meaning. It is worth success because they have experience failure. We don\'t need to feel foolish about failure.

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Success is obtaining your goals, and failure is not.

>> CORRECT

But, I don\'t think failure has a negative meaning.

>> CORRECT

It is worth success because they have experience failure.

>>The worth of success is felt because they experienced failure.

We don\'t need to feel foolish about failure.

>> We don\'t need to feel foolish when we fail.

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