What is your dream car?
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If I buy a car, I want to have a Lamborghini which is considered as being rich and its model is prettier than any other cars for me.
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Hi there Judy!
I am very grateful that you did your homework. Well, Lamborghini is really a unique car not only on how it looks like but also it\'s overall performance. Anyway, driving one someday can be a very good experience. Owning it is a different story. So, see you soon!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: If I buy a car, I want to have a Lamborghini which is considered to be for the rich and its model is prettier than any other car for me.
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